The perspectives of the multiple hand panels are believable and well done, one of my favourite panels of the comic is when he switches on the light, I think it is successful as it reads either he is bringing his creature to life or that he is beginning to start his work. I found the comic easy to follow, and the panel layout has just enough variety that it remains interesting to read and not repetitive. I was a little confused on when the little creature falls into the drawer, my brain wasn’t quite convinced, but I understood what was happening. Over all good cohesion of the story and ability to make the characters recognizable throughout the story.
I find the linework to be very fitting for this kind of wordless comic its very delicate and I hope that you carry that over to the final draft. There is a between two panels where I wasn’t sure what was happening but then realized it was a light, I’m not sure what could be done differently, maybe a different angle would help to convert that.
Very crisp linework and the characters’ autonomy are very accurately portrayed. The hands are also very well structured. There is a lot of detail within the environment that lets the viewer get to know the protagonists and backstory. Each pose and panel has a purpose, which is very important within a comic, especially with no words. The main characters’ looks are also consistent, making the characters recognizable throughout the story. I love it so much, and I am excited to see how it turns out.
Holly Bartels
The perspectives of the multiple hand panels are believable and well done, one of my favourite panels of the comic is when he switches on the light, I think it is successful as it reads either he is bringing his creature to life or that he is beginning to start his work. I found the comic easy to follow, and the panel layout has just enough variety that it remains interesting to read and not repetitive. I was a little confused on when the little creature falls into the drawer, my brain wasn’t quite convinced, but I understood what was happening. Over all good cohesion of the story and ability to make the characters recognizable throughout the story.
Simone Olanski
I find the linework to be very fitting for this kind of wordless comic its very delicate and I hope that you carry that over to the final draft. There is a between two panels where I wasn’t sure what was happening but then realized it was a light, I’m not sure what could be done differently, maybe a different angle would help to convert that.
Shannae Jaccard
Very crisp linework and the characters’ autonomy are very accurately portrayed. The hands are also very well structured. There is a lot of detail within the environment that lets the viewer get to know the protagonists and backstory. Each pose and panel has a purpose, which is very important within a comic, especially with no words. The main characters’ looks are also consistent, making the characters recognizable throughout the story. I love it so much, and I am excited to see how it turns out.