I love the three main characters! They are all very distinctly different from one another, and you can sense their unique personalities. I think that the hourglass panel is an interesting choice, but it works well. It is an effective way to make a time-skip with no words. A bit more scenery could enhance the comic and perhaps more enthusiasm within the character’s body language and facial expressions could help keep the viewer interested in the character’s journey.
Shannae
I love the three main characters! They are all very distinctly different from one another, and you can sense their unique personalities. I think that the hourglass panel is an interesting choice, but it works well. It is an effective way to make a time-skip with no words. A bit more scenery could enhance the comic and perhaps more enthusiasm within the character’s body language and facial expressions could help keep the viewer interested in the character’s journey.