the idea of using multiple characters and panels is not bad however the dimension of the panels may seem too overwhelming and confusing in the story. however, the composition and style of the drawing have a good aspect with the characters making them more animated. now that you’re adding more quality with the pencil to the characters would be more interesting. one suggestion is to try to not to exaggerate their body shapes somehow that they may not look to cartoonist.
I really appreciate the dynamic poses of the “heroic characters” it clearly reads Hero. I think the story is clear to understand and I can’t wait to see it finished.
David Bravo
the idea of using multiple characters and panels is not bad however the dimension of the panels may seem too overwhelming and confusing in the story. however, the composition and style of the drawing have a good aspect with the characters making them more animated. now that you’re adding more quality with the pencil to the characters would be more interesting. one suggestion is to try to not to exaggerate their body shapes somehow that they may not look to cartoonist.
Simone Olanski
I really appreciate the dynamic poses of the “heroic characters” it clearly reads Hero. I think the story is clear to understand and I can’t wait to see it finished.