For the top-right panel, the middle frame is not clear on what it conveys. The compositions maintain a good fluidity from long shot to medium shot and then a pov shot. The narrative is clear in that the protagonist receives a facetime call on his cellphone; however, there seems to be no conflict in the story that needs resolving/resolution.
The narrative is clear about who the protagonist is, and his POV is also understood to be his own, as the viewer is presented their own 3rd-person POV. The person that the protagonist meets is understood to be a friendly acquaintance and they are going to be partners in this narrative. All of this is revealed through a continuity that is understood to exist in an urban setting. (feedback provided by Reno Anastasio – Mon Mar 21 2022)
I absolutely love the little details throughout each panel and the amount of effort that went into the set design. The amount of scenery makes the comic more pleasant overall, but the proportions of both the characters and objects need a little bit of tweaking. The plot is also a bit unclear but I think I understand the character and his personality. It might also help to use poses with more movement to engage the viewers and help them understand the characters’ intentions.
Reno Anastasio
For the top-right panel, the middle frame is not clear on what it conveys. The compositions maintain a good fluidity from long shot to medium shot and then a pov shot. The narrative is clear in that the protagonist receives a facetime call on his cellphone; however, there seems to be no conflict in the story that needs resolving/resolution.
Reno Anastasio
The narrative is clear about who the protagonist is, and his POV is also understood to be his own, as the viewer is presented their own 3rd-person POV. The person that the protagonist meets is understood to be a friendly acquaintance and they are going to be partners in this narrative. All of this is revealed through a continuity that is understood to exist in an urban setting. (feedback provided by Reno Anastasio – Mon Mar 21 2022)
Shannae Jaccard
I absolutely love the little details throughout each panel and the amount of effort that went into the set design. The amount of scenery makes the comic more pleasant overall, but the proportions of both the characters and objects need a little bit of tweaking. The plot is also a bit unclear but I think I understand the character and his personality. It might also help to use poses with more movement to engage the viewers and help them understand the characters’ intentions.