The plot might be confusing, but the visuals are very intriguing. It is an interesting choice of subjects, such as eyeballs. It is uncommon and new to me. I think that Adrian could add more movement to the eyeballs as they are very soft rather than stiff in real life. Perhaps adding more movement to make the eyeballs look jiggly could be beneficial. The protagonist’s design is consistent and recognizable throughout each panel which helps the viewer understand the story a bit more.
Shannae
The plot might be confusing, but the visuals are very intriguing. It is an interesting choice of subjects, such as eyeballs. It is uncommon and new to me. I think that Adrian could add more movement to the eyeballs as they are very soft rather than stiff in real life. Perhaps adding more movement to make the eyeballs look jiggly could be beneficial. The protagonist’s design is consistent and recognizable throughout each panel which helps the viewer understand the story a bit more.