The establishing of the narrative, and the 3rd-person POV are clearly understood, with a single character in conflict with themselves through a bad dream. The dream is unsettling, involving the dismemberment of eyeballs which then get made into a collar or necklace. The POV becomes 1st-person inside the dream and maintains this with the help of the layout and arrangement of the overlapping frames. (feedback provided by Reno Anastasio – Mon Mar 21 2022)
Reno Anastasio
The establishing of the narrative, and the 3rd-person POV are clearly understood, with a single character in conflict with themselves through a bad dream. The dream is unsettling, involving the dismemberment of eyeballs which then get made into a collar or necklace. The POV becomes 1st-person inside the dream and maintains this with the help of the layout and arrangement of the overlapping frames. (feedback provided by Reno Anastasio – Mon Mar 21 2022)