I find your page layout easy to follow and interesting, and I like how you don’t overcomplicate the pages by adding to many panels or unnecessary detail within your panels. I also find your combat scenes quick and easy to understand, but they don’t compromise the feeling of tension. I do think that the panels where she is on the ground to feel slightly crowded in comparison to the other pages, but overall I think the story feels cohesive and I enjoy how easily the relationships between characters are understood.
I love the gestures in these panels, there is lots of energy and movement throughout which helps carry the eye to the next panel. I also admire the close-up of the features of the face using the free-floating panels. I find that to be very effective in conveying tone.
Emma Guenther
I find your page layout easy to follow and interesting, and I like how you don’t overcomplicate the pages by adding to many panels or unnecessary detail within your panels. I also find your combat scenes quick and easy to understand, but they don’t compromise the feeling of tension. I do think that the panels where she is on the ground to feel slightly crowded in comparison to the other pages, but overall I think the story feels cohesive and I enjoy how easily the relationships between characters are understood.
Simone Olanski
I love the gestures in these panels, there is lots of energy and movement throughout which helps carry the eye to the next panel. I also admire the close-up of the features of the face using the free-floating panels. I find that to be very effective in conveying tone.