13 items collected by: Isabelle

Spread 3

Just wondering if my new transition works? I have a reflection of the main character in the top set of eyes and the world of memory in the…

Final Scene

Spread 2

Spread 1

I’ve edited the transition on page 2, hoping it makes more sense with the colour matching in the cocktail glass?

Tentative Storyboard

Tentative plan for a storyboard, I’d like to keep the first two page spread as-is, but if the rest isn’t clear I’m happy to make changes. I’ve added…

Page 2

Page 1

Page 2

I want to compare the action of pouring a drink to watering flowers. Does my layout do this effectively? I’m hesitant to dive into too much detail if…

Flashback Characters

The 2 main characters enter a childhood state together

Flashback Protagonist

Protagonist as a young girl, simple dress and bare feet indicate a youthfulness and innocence. Debating whether hair should be loose and free to add to this effect?

Bar Scene

Study of the dark bar environment that I’d like to incorporate into my story, complete with protagonist working behind the bar.

Character 2

Character 1